http://www.box.net/shared/5mbnlhep92

Please forgive the speaker farts.. Tried to get rid of them all but ........

That's really cool! I like it a lot.

Any more comments? Criticism is always helpful

Actually, just uploaded a new version..

http://www.box.net/shared/5mbnlhep92

The voicing is really nice--very rich. Good work developing the ideas in it; that's something I really really struggle with. The end was really abrupt, though...is this the intro to a larger work, or unfinished, or was that your intended effect?

Well the ringing is supposed to be voice.. But at the end, winds are supposed to be very soft, dying down from where the voice chords start with their solo. I'll go ahead and expand that, and have a new version for you in a day or so

I meant the use of instruments. The orchestration, I guess. The end, though, seemed just a little abrupt.

Perhaps you have something to offer for my dilemma here on the forum as well?

I know, I know. It was just a fyi.

I haven't started doing full shows yet so I really cant give any meaningful insight on your topic, sorry.