http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ciwkl5vUQXE

Hey guys, this is a little composition that I am currenty working on. I decided to post the opener and part one of movement II. I am currently taking any and all criticism given to better my composition writing skills and the piece itself. This piece is inspired by Aaron Guidry's "It Chooses Me". I'm not an Alex Yoder, Aaron Guidry, or Richard Saucedo, but this is something serious I wanted to produce. This is a marching band composition and none of these measures/dynamics are set in stone yet. The flute audio for some reason came out with a bell sound so the solo will be provided with clarinet. Enjoy! (You'll have to view the video in full screen)

Wouldn't mind comments either. What you liked, what you didn't like ect. Thnks

I like it! not sure how good that would be as is as a field show, but it could be really good as is in a concert setting... Can't wait to hear more

I would have to agree that some parts seem more like a concert setting.